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I think you're right about the contraction on the sides; that would eliminate the extra fabric visible in front of her right arm.

You did a great job accommodating a larger bust. You might be able to give her a little more support by shortening the upper straps a bit. I know I always needed that extra support (until the surgeon got rid of the excess).

I like that you don't have "side boob" issues and yet you also don't have the fabric up into the armpit area. Well done.

I like the way you made back straps

nice job!

Thank you both for the comments. For the next run at it, I am going to bring the front in some, lower the back so the straps run straight, take some out of the shoulder strap and then contract the outer edges.